PLOT OUTLINE
Scene 1
¥ Starts in detectives office
¥ Detective asking innocent girl questions about the murder
¥ He is asking her to think back to that night
¥ Fade to white
Scene 2
¥ She is back in her room lying in bed with dirty clothes still on with small bloodstains in clothes.
¥ She has a headache so she goes down stairs to get a panadol
¥ She calls for her sister as she is walking to the kitchen
¥ She says, “Katie, where are you?” Walks into the living room.
Scene 3
¥ Detective asks what happened next
¥ Fade to white
Scene 4
¥ Flashback of her seeing her sister on the ground
drops glass of water
drops glass of water
¥ Shot from her point of view looking at her sister
¥ Shot of her sisters point of view with someone standing behind her about to hit her
Scene 5
¥ Detective asks, “What’s the last thing you remember?”
¥ Fade to white
Scene 6
¥ Emma lying on the ground knocked out next to the window
¥ Opens her eyes a tiny bit to see a man fleeing.
Scene 7
¥ Detective asks, “What did he look like?”
¥ Innocent girl says, “He was very tall, but I didn’t see anything else.”
¥ Detective says, “Thank you, you can go now.”
¥ Girl walks out of office.
Scene 8
¥ Side detective walks in ask’ “How old was the girl?”
¥ Detective reply’s “12”
¥ Side detective throws 5 newspapers on the table and says, “we need to get him, and according to this he will be killing again tonight.”
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